Constructive Criticism
I know this probably took a while to make but i highly suggest that you increase your presentability. An important thing to remember is to make all the screens look top notch, by adding that extra detail, and this movie didn't do that. The gradients look too fabricated and really brings the animation down.
I don't play FF games much, but I can see the effect you want to gie with this. Make sure that you give the same effect all around, on every screen. It can be as simple as animating a candle to affect the lighting and mood on your title screen. The music was good in this movie though, it really made it more enjoyable.
Also, if you are to make another movie, make sure that the text stays up long enough to read, or even better, add buttons that allow users to go through at their own pace.
I hope this helps you with your next piece. Don't give up!