It could be improved...
Overall, i thought that your idea was pretty good. There was a fairly decent plot line, the story had a climax and what not. You had a nice variety of sounds and pretty good music that suited the movie. I also enjoyed those finely drawn vehicles, although they appeared in the movie for only a few seconds. Your settings were pretty poorly drawn. If you had of put as much work intro drawing the scenery as you did the vehicles, it would have been a spectacular movie.
The clocks are getting old...
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